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Tuesday, 5 December 2017

Light house

I watch a video called the lighthouse the People don't talk on it

Light house

“They are loud at the party”.

“What was that”.

“Oww”.

“What is broken in here”?

“The little light is broken”?

“Oh god the ship is coming closer to the rocks”.

“I'm gonna pick this up and go put another one on the fix it oww my head”.



everyone's coming to help with the lanterns.

“Thank you everyone for helping me to stop the the Ship to breaking with the lantern”.







The end

By Jayden.p

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