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Friday, 15 December 2017

the best Snowman

Today we are Rolling a dice and what number it does land on You have to do on the blog post.

On Christmas Eve a Snowman is looking around in a Gingerbread house.

Then he found a supervillain with a weird gun to destroy Christmas.

The snowman hides in the snow and he Jumped up and landed on the weird gun and destroyed it then he saved Christmas.


The end

By Jayden

1 comment:

  1. Hey Jayden,
    What a great post you have here. I like the way that you have explained what the post is about and have created an illustration to match your story. The title is also a good one! Your story reminded me of a cartoon!
    To make this post even better you could make sure that the words in your title have capital letters!
    - Miss Morgan

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