I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Tuesday, 20 November 2018
Understanding Song Lyrics
In Literary we have been learning about understanding song lyrics. We listened to two songs , they were by Michael Jackson and Bruno Mars. Michael Jackson did Man in the mirror and Bruno Mars did the Treasure. We discussed and brainstormed the song title meanings. We then looked at the lyrics and what they meant. Treasure by Bruno Mars is about he thing that girl is Treasure. Man in the mirror by Michael Jackson is about how to change your surf and the world.
Wednesday, 24 October 2018
adding wow words to boring sentences
Wednesday, 17 October 2018
hero
On wednesday we have been learning characters in reading it is hero and villain. I had to work out if the words main hero or villain.This is my work.
Tuesday, 4 September 2018
Friday, 24 August 2018
Tuesday, 14 August 2018
Thursday, 2 August 2018
A Recipe Of Winter
First we brainstormed winter related words then we talked about words use to measure when cooking we then wrote ingredients for winter wing owr group brainstorms.
Wednesday, 1 August 2018
Wednesday, 25 July 2018
Going to the movie theatre to watch Hotel Transylvania 3
For literacy we have been writing about our holidays. What I found challenging was writing it. What I enjoyed was putting it on my blog.
Going to the movie theatre to watch Hotel Transylvania 3
Who.? Mum Dad sister and my little brother.
What? Popcorn fairy and lolly.
When? I went Sunday.
Where? Hoyts Riccarton movie theatre.
Why? To have fun.
I went to the hoyts riccarton movie theatre on Sunday with my family. What I had for food was popcorn and lollies. I went to have fun with my family.
On a sunny day I went to the movie theatre to watch hotel transylvania 3.
As soon as we got there we brought our tickets and we went to our seats.
I was excited for the movie to start. We got out our movie snacks.
After a while of waiting the movie suddenly started.
When the movie was finished my favourite thing about it was the giant octopus.
When the movie was finished I hopped in my dad's car and all of us drove home.
I had a great time at the movie theatre because the movie was so funny. I tried to not laugh at the movie.
By Jayden
Thursday, 5 July 2018
Winter poem
In literacy we have been writing about winter. We had to do a poem about it. The hard thing was planning. The easy thing was writing. We planned it together, then added our own planning, t then we wrote it and bloged it.
Wednesday, 27 June 2018
Chinese New Year
In literacy I have been learning about celebrated and I found out information about why how\where\who\when people celebrate the Chinese New Year.
I had to watch a videos read about it and created own dragon or lion.
I found reading about chinese new year difficult.
I enjoyed creating our own dragons or lions.
I had to watch a videos read about it and created own dragon or lion.
I found reading about chinese new year difficult.
I enjoyed creating our own dragons or lions.
When - between january 21 february 20 new moon
Who\where - china - anyone who is chinese. All around the world.
How - light + sound.firecrackers. Traditional lion dance.
- Families- dinner - clean their house to sweep away bad luck an new year's day.
- Red envelopes - lucky money “ - family gives it to children.
Why - welcame the new year to bring good luck, good fortune,wealth prosperity + happiness
Dragon dance
- The dragon dance is performed by a skilled team whose job is to bring the motionless body to life.
- The correct combination and proper timing of the different parts of the dragon are very important to make a successful dance.
- Any mistakes made by even some of the performers would spoil the whole performance.
- To be very successful in the dance, the head of the Dragon must be able to coordinate with the body movement to match the timing of the drum.
- For larger ceremonial and parade style dragons, the head can weigh as much as 12 katie (14.4 kg, almost 32 lb).
Wednesday, 2 May 2018
Best Part Of Me
This week in writing we have been learning to use adjectives [wow words]. We read the story "The best part of me by Wendy Ewald. next we brainstormed ideas about our best body part. This is my writing. What is your best body part and why?
Best part of me
The best part of me is my hands.I use my hands to hold tools to build my go-kart and to but the lawn mower engine on the go-kart.I use my hands to play scrap mechanic.I use my hands to push my Dad trailer when it need to move. I use my hands to build a huge lego plane.
Wednesday, 28 March 2018
flamethrower Writing
In writing we have been learning about using wow words. We watched a slow motion video about a flame thrower , Then we brainstormed wow words and similes to describe the flame.
Friday, 15 December 2017
the best Snowman
Today we are Rolling a dice and what number it does land on You have to do on the blog post.
On Christmas Eve a Snowman is looking around in a Gingerbread house.
Then he found a supervillain with a weird gun to destroy Christmas.
The snowman hides in the snow and he Jumped up and landed on the weird gun and destroyed it then he saved Christmas.
The end
Tuesday, 5 December 2017
Light house
I watch a video called the lighthouse the People don't talk on it
Light house
“They are loud at the party”.
“What was that”.
“Oww”.
“What is broken in here”?
“The little light is broken”?
“Oh god the ship is coming closer to the rocks”.
“I'm gonna pick this up and go put another one on the fix it oww my head”.
everyone's coming to help with the lanterns.
“Thank you everyone for helping me to stop the the Ship to breaking with the lantern”.
The end
By Jayden.p
Friday, 1 December 2017
1. I think the Pigeon isn't allowed to drive the bus because he is a animal.
2.The pigeon can't reach the pedals because of it short feet.
3. I think the pigeon shouldn't drive the bus because the person said don't Let the Pigeon Drive the Bus.
4. The Pigeon is too small to reach the gear stick.
5. Overall the pigeon will be dangerous if it drive the bus
by Jayden.p
Thursday, 30 November 2017
death
Today we making a pick a path story out of Google form.
Please let me know what you thought about my story.
Please let me know what you thought about my story.
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